To read the first chapter of "Apples: Immortal Tree" for me?

I've unpublished everything, and you need a password to see the chapters.

I've gone through chapter one and like I said yesterday, i just need someone to proofread through it.

PM me if interested.

(i'll try to get a couple chapters modified each day before i publish it all again. This should be done by next week at the latest and this weekend by the earliest. Then, I'll start the new chapters.)